We are learning to entertain our audience. We know that we can do this when we do things like using adjectives to describe things and making our beginnings interesting. We are able to use sequencing words like then, next and after that.
We would love you to give us some feedback.
What do you like to write about?
3 comments:
Hi Room 2 Rockets
We think your art is wonderful. You must go to art classes because you are so clever. We love doing art in Room 16. We usually have art on Fridays. What day do you do art?
from Alice, Chloe and Te Kapua
Hi Rockets
Wow - your writing wall looks amazing! It is so beautifully presented that it grabs your eye and makes you want to head over and read the stories.
Perhaps you could type up some of the stories and post them on your blog or use a recording tool to share some of them with us.
We have been writing about the history of Guy Fawkes. Did you know Guy Fawkes was actually a man who tried to blow up parliament buildings in England 400 years ago?
Have a great week.
From Kids with a view.
Hi Mrs Laburn and Kids with a view.
Thanks for your detailed comment. We have been so busy this term, but we love sharing our writing, so Cora has posted a story for you.
We talked about the history of Guy Fawkes too. We found it amazing that it was SO long ago. We love the thought of things being blown up though - especially the boys!
We will be checking our your blog soon!
Miss Revell and the Rockets
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